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Students should choose a university majo that prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extent do you agree with the statement?

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In the modern times of highly competitive work
environment
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 and lucrative paying jobs,
people
 are faced with a dilemma about career-path selection. Some
people
 consider monetary benefits over career interests.
However
, in my opinion, selecting
careers
 based on the expected pay is completely preposterous. Incoming university
students
 are tempted to choose majors based on the prevalent market pay rates. A highly remunerating job will make an individual financially more stable than an average-paying job,
as a result
,
students
 tend to choose
such
careers
.
Moreover
, university attendees believe they will be able to pay student loans faster, than their counterparts and can quickly become debt-free.
According to
 a Princeton research article,
for instance
, it was seen that over 50 % of high-school graduates are considering Computer science majors owing to their high remuneration.
Consequently
, it's believed that
people
 choose
careers
 as
per
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 pay.
On the other hand
,
students
 just choosing
careers
 based on pay is highly unreasonable in my opinion
due to
 numerous reasons. First and foremost, owing to their greed for money,
people
 end up in a major which they don't seem to enjoy and eventually fail miserably in exams.
Additionally
, even after earning they don't feel excited and self-satisfied about the work they are performing.
For instance
,
students
 taking subjects just because of high pay in the future leads to lesser innovation and economic development of the nation.
Hence
,
students
 should consider their interests
above all
.
Although
 the monetary benefit of a particular career tempts one to choose a specific major,
however
, taking
such
 an approach is superfluous and should be dealt with carefully. In conclusion, I am of the strong opinion to follow one's interest and passion, as
this
 can eventually take you to the top and be financially more secure.
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