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It is said that governments should encourage people to use only public transportation to travel because of many problems caused by private cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many
people
 argue that governments should encourage
people
 to
use
 only public transportation to
travel
 because of many
problems
 caused by private
cars
. Personally, I agree with
this
 opinion and will outline the reasons in
this
 essay. There are a host of reasons why governments should encourage society to
use
 only public transport to
travel
 because of many
problems
 caused by private
cars
 that
this
 is an ideal solution for citizens concerns in urban areas around the world
such
 as rising fuel costs, environmental issues, and especially busy roads.
First,
the ideal solution for citizens’ concerns in urban areas around the world
such
 as rising fuel costs, environmental
problems
, and especially busy roads. Fuel consumption will be
significal
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significantly
significant
 reduced when
people
use
public
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the public
a public
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car
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cars
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.
Beside
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, the emissions are formed mainly
due to
 the
vehicles
, which are the majority of personal
vehicles
.
For example
, the percentage of traffic
jam
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jams
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 during rush hour is much lower in small
city
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cities
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 with less population than
big
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in big
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city
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cities
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 like Ha Noi,
Ho
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and Ho
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 Chi Minh city.
This
 is why the fewer
priavte
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private
 car, the less busy roads are. Another reason
can
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 be added is the number of
cars
 which is owned by the citizens rise to meet
to
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apply
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their commuting demands. The fact that their
use
 of personal
vehicles
 to
travel
 is for quick convenience.
However
, if
people
are
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all
use
of
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personal
vehicles
, the traffic will always be
in
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apply
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a
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apply
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traffic jam. The majority of
people
 using personal
vehicles
 will cause air
polution
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pollution
, the gas
emision
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emission
emissions
 can affect
for
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people
’s health severely.
While
 moving, these
vehicles
are emit
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emit
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 carbon that can affect the
astmosphere
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atmosphere
, accumulation of emissions will cause the greenhouse effect to increase the ambient temperature.
For instance
, the majority of
people
 in Viet Nam
are
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are using
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use
 personal vehicle to move,
it
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which
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 affect
a
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them a
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lot to
environment
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the environment
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 because of gas
emision
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emission
emissions
. In conclusion, for the reasons I have noticed above, I strongly agree with the view that governments should encourage
people
 to
use
 only public transportation to
travel
 because of many
problems
 caused by private
cars
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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