You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter o describe the public event o explain why you think he/she would like the event o write how you can help your friend with accommodation

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Dear Ishmam, It has been quite a long time haven’t met you. Today I am writing you

this

letter to invite you to a special

event

named Noboborsho which will be held next Saturday. The

event

is basically held for the Bengali New Year. During

this

event

, the people of Bangladesh wear cultural clothes in Red and White. Males wear Punjabi or Fotua and females wear kameez or saree.To start the celebration of the new year every house eats rice and fish(Pantha and Elish) for their breakfast. Afterwards, families visit their relatives, and some people go to small stalls(mela) and enjoy different famous rides. Businesses open new books of the year and offer new calendars and sweets for their clients.

Overall

, the

event

is very mesmerizing which I believe you would enjoy a lot. I would love to welcome you to

this

event

and for that I can accommodate your plane ticket from Nepal to Bangladesh the day before. Once you reach the airport in Bangladesh, I will come to pick you up in my car. Later on, you can stay at my guest house, and we can enjoy the Noboborsho together the next day. Yours Sincerely , Nazmul

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