You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter o describe the public event o explain why you think he/she would like the event o write how you can help your friend with accommodation

#friend #event #country #accommodation

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Ishmam, It has been quite a long time haven’t met you. Today I am writing you

this

letter to invite you to a special

event

named Noboborsho which will be held next Saturday. The

event

is basically held for the Bengali New Year. During

this

event

, the people of Bangladesh wear cultural clothes in Red and White. Males wear Punjabi or Fotua and females wear kameez or saree.To start the celebration of the new year every house eats rice and fish(Pantha and Elish) for their breakfast. Afterwards, families visit their relatives, and some people go to small stalls(mela) and enjoy different famous rides. Businesses open new books of the year and offer new calendars and sweets for their clients.

Overall

, the

event

is very mesmerizing which I believe you would enjoy a lot. I would love to welcome you to

this

event

and for that I can accommodate your plane ticket from Nepal to Bangladesh the day before. Once you reach the airport in Bangladesh, I will come to pick you up in my car. Later on, you can stay at my guest house, and we can enjoy the Noboborsho together the next day. Yours Sincerely , Nazmul

Submitted by yeahyeamin on Sun Jun 18 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

199 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4
band
Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is argued that nations are approaching to a more equal state owing to the purchasability of the same item around the globe.I believe that this is a positive trend as such this will lead to a reduction of money wastage by citizens and help to reduce conflicts among different parts of the world.
7
band
Many claims that the fast-food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that the convenience food industry had a devastating impact on our surroundings and families as well as influenced unhealthy eating habits. This essay completely agrees with this statement because of the negative impacts and challenges that it has contributed to the environment and the community. This essay will examine my views in detail with relevant examples.
5.5
band
You have lost something on a bus and called customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: · describe the item you lost · explain why you weren't happy with the customer service · say what action you would like the company to take.
Hope this letter finds you well .I am writing this letter to express my sadness regarding the customer service of your bus .
4.5
band
Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.do you agree or disgree.
Healthcare workers are considered heros of society ,and it is contended by some masses that doctors should render the knowledge of wholesome lifestyle to their patients.. I accord with this assertion solely, and I will mention various factors in upcoming composition to support this particular notion.
5.5
band
Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. Do the advantages of this for their study outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's era, some students who graduate from school want to travel or work for a period of time rather than going immedately to university. This action has some pros that will outweigh the cons. This essay intends to express advantages of travel or work before starting university.

You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter o describe the public event o explain why you think he/she would like the event o write how you can help your friend with accommodation

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Many claims that the fast-food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.do you agree or disgree.

Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. Do the advantages of this for their study outweigh the disadvantages?