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Nowadays , air pollution is becoming a global problem over the world. Suggest some appropriate solutions with relevant examples.

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In contemporary society, one of the main problems of the world is
air
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pollution
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, which became a vast topic, and it's increasingly commonplace on all continents. Many experts opine that
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 danger spreads worldwide. In
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 essay, I will examine both views and explain why it's proliferating all over the world
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 the following expository paragraphs will expatiate both stances with lucid examples. In the early 1900s century, the problem of
air
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pollution
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 was comparatively less than at the present time because it wasn't many types of machinery and techniques.
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, it gave us major opportunities to live in fresh
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 conditions and clean habitats.
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 big cities as London, face
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 issue because the development of its techniques leading them to detrimental
air
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 condition. In Mongolia,
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, 5 out of 10 citizens have some kind of lung difficulty.
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 they are abundant in minerals, it isn't enough to overcome
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 trouble.
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, The more enhanced electronics, the more
air
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pollution
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 will increase. The only effective way to reduce
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 problem is by planting enormous woods all over the place where we live.
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 research conducted by the Department of Scientists at Harvard University, it is scientifically proven that if all people plant a tree in the area where they live, we will overcome the issue of
air
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pollution
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. By reducing the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, trees help mitigate climate change and global warming, and
air
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pollution
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. In conclusion, we should avoid destroying our habitat
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 of existing them.
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, trees play a major role in the world.
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, all countries people ought to take care of their
environmental
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environment
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