Classroom attendance at universities should be optional. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Nowadays many people choose to continue their

study

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studies

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the

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university. There are some rules that need to be followed after they join the college as a

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as dress code, number of credits, minimum GPA and attending

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. Some universities make

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attendance as a not mandatory thing because some people can follow the subject without

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in the

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benefit, there are more problems

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idea, and I disagree with it.

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essay will examine my opinion and provide the detail of the issues.

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lecturers

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the lesson is understandable for

students

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. If they do not come to the

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lecturers

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could not create quizzes in the middle of

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session to assess their

students

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. Even if

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already read a book they need to go to the

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because

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have more knowledge than a book. They got it from their research and many books that maybe did not release in public anymore.

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, if

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have another question or another confirmation about the subject, they need to ask

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in the

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, so another

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get new knowledge too. Another issue is some subjects need a lot of discussion, working

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classmates and presentation in front of

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class

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. It can not be done if

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classroom

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attendance is

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optional for

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could not evaluate how the discussion work, the teamwork, and assess the active

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. In conclusion, the opinion to make

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attendance

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an optional rule in the college is not a good step. If

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want to learn something with flexible time, they can join some online courses that they can watch every time and everywhere.

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, it

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with that kind of

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because online courses apply

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learning, unlike

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in university.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Classroom attendance at universities should be optional. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air polution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (eg cost, environment). Discuss both view and give your own opinion.