Classroom attendance at universities should be optional. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays many people choose to continue their
study
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to
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the
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university. There are some rules that need to be followed after they join the college as a
student
,
such
as dress code, number of credits, minimum GPA and attending
class
. Some universities make
classroom
attendance as a not mandatory thing because some people can follow the subject without
meet
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with
lecturer
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the lecturer
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in the
class
. Despite
this
benefit, there are more problems
about
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this
idea, and I disagree with it.
This
essay will examine my opinion and provide the detail of the issues.
Firstly
,
lecturers
need to make sure
if
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the lesson is understandable for
students
. If they do not come to the
class
,
lecturers
could not create quizzes in the middle of
learning
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session to assess their
students
. Even if
students
already read a book they need to go to the
class
because
lecturers
have more knowledge than a book. They got it from their research and many books that maybe did not release in public anymore.
Also
, if
students
have another question or another confirmation about the subject, they need to ask
lecturer
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in the
classroom
, so another
student
get new knowledge too. Another issue is some subjects need a lot of discussion, working
together with
classmates and presentation in front of
class
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the class
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. It can not be done if
the
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classroom
attendance is
an
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optional for
students
.
Lecturers
could not evaluate how the discussion work, the teamwork, and assess the active
student
. In conclusion, the opinion to make
classroom
attendance
as
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an optional rule in the college is not a good step. If
students
want to learn something with flexible time, they can join some online courses that they can watch every time and everywhere.
Also
, it
fit
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with that kind of
student
because online courses apply
one way
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learning, unlike
class
in university.
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