You have just enrolled in a 12 week English class, but have found that you have a family problem and you will have to return home. Write to the school. In your letter 􀁸 Explain what has happened 􀁸 Request a refund 􀁸 Ask whether you will be able to return at a later date

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that

due to

unforeseen circumstances, unfortunately, I will no longer be able to join the twelve-week English class at your institute which commences next week. I am enrolled in Batch 7. Yesterday I received information about my grandmother's health condition, she suffered from a minor heart attack, and

thus

, requires emergency surgery which is scheduled for

this

Saturday.

For

this

reason, I would have to urgently travel back home to take care of her pre and post-operation. As

this

is a family emergency,

according to

the institute's refund policy I am allowed a full refund.

Therefore

, I would be grateful if you could initiate a refund at your earliest convenience.

Due to

a shortage of funds in my bank account, I require the refunded money to book my travel tickets. Thereby, your early action is necessary.

Also

, I would like to know if it is possible to transfer my name to the summer batch which starts next month. English proficiency is required to apply for the job I am interested in.

Hence

, would like to start the twelve-week English language course with the next group on my return. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Akshita Parasher

Submitted by parasherakshita123 on Sun Jun 18 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

215 words

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You have just enrolled in a 12 week English class, but have found that you have a family problem and you will have to return home. Write to the school. In your letter 􀁸 Explain what has happened 􀁸 Request a refund 􀁸 Ask whether you will be able to return at a later date

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Many people think that museums and art galleries should only show work from local artists rather than work from other countries. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).

Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorway and what solutions are there?