You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

Dear Mr. Josh, How are you? I heard that your retirement party is scheduled for next week.

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news deeply saddened me as you are my favourite teacher and I can't imagine not seeing you in school. Upon receiving a text from my friend about your retirement, at

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I couldn't believe it. I knew

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day is coming, but didn't expect it to arrive

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early. As I have always said, I adore your way of teaching Maths. You make learning fun, and your passion for the subject, and friendly and non-judgemental nature make you stand out from the rest of the teachers in our school. Your presence in my life has been revolutionary as you taught me discipline and patience, the two most important skills to excel in Maths, and in life.

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, I started liking Maths because of your guidance. I even topped my class in the

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exam, all thanks to you! See you at the retirement party and I wish to stay in touch even afterwards. Yours sincerely, Akshita Parasher

parasherakshita123

Jun 18, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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