The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

The bar chart provides information about doctors' and other workers' salaries per year in seven distinct countries in 2004.

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, the annual salary of doctors is always bigger compared to other professions. In the US, a

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income per year is 125 thousand dollars which is more than two times other workers' annual pay that just under 50 thousand dollars. Other countries

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show a similar pattern between doctors' and other occupations' annual pay. Italy, the Czech Republic, and Germany have nearly identical conditions which is a

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yearly salary is twice of other jobs’ income in one year. Finlandia is the country that has the lowest

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income compared to another occupation salary yearly among the seven countries, but doctors’ annual earnings are still twice of other jobs' annual wages. There is only one exception which is in Switzerland that

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annual take-home pay did not reach two times of other kinds of job annual earnings.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

157 words

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The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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