The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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This
graph depicts a percentage of the population
in four countries for two different periods with a vision for 2030 and 2040. It is clear from the line chart that both of Philippines and Malaysia have the same population
with
about 30%.
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According to
what is shown Philippines
has Correct article usage
the Philippines
a
constant Correct article usage
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growth
between 1970 and 1980, but between 1980 and 1990 there was a sharp increase
of about 20% more
and after ,that there was varied Correct quantifier usage
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growth
until 2020 and in the ,
future they will complete Remove the comma
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growth
. Moreover
, there was a stable increase
between 1970 and 1990, but after ,that there was constant growth
to the end of the period.
Next,
Thailand has a stable increase
to 1990, after that there was a mostly stable percentage between 1990 and 2020, but it will complete an increase
in their vision. ,Finally
there was a varied Add a comma
,Finally
population
in Indonesia but it was a complete increase
to the last
.
To sum up
, we could say that all the countries in the future will face growth
in their population
with a stable increase
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