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The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.

The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.
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The table illustrates the percentages of TV programs that have been watched by citizens of the European nation, which were divided into three categories of
age
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 in 2012.
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, a glance at the figure provided reveals that there were different programs in each group, which became the
most
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favourite of the audiences in that country.
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,
majority
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 of children, which below 15 years, viewed
cartoon
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cartoons
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 as their favourite channel, stood at almost a third. It is followed by sports
program
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programs
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 at 22%, and
then
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 features film and soap opera, which both of them had a similar
number
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 at around 18%.
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, TV dramas and news
was
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 the least program in that group.
In contrast
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, most
of
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the age
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age
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ages
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in
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between 15 and 20 years, liked to watch features
film
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films
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 and news, with 23% and 19% respectively.
Furthermore
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, the spectators
of
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in
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 that category preferred to watch
cartoon
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cartoons
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 and sports, with an identical
number
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 at 18 per cent. The remaining categories had small portions at under 12%. Based on the
last
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 group with
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age
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ages
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 below 25 years, news, sports, and features film had the highest proportions among all programs at over 20% of audiences during the period. Soap opera had a slightly lower
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 at 19%,
whereas
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 the
number
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 of audiences, who watched TV dramas at only 13%.
Cartoon
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Cartoons
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 became the minority in that
age
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groups
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 with
had
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a small percentage.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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