The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.
The table illustrates the percentages of TV programs that have been watched by citizens of the European nation, which were divided into three categories of
age
in 2012. Overall
, a glance at the figure provided reveals that there were different programs in each group, which became the most
favourite of the audiences in that country.
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To begin
, majority
of children, which below 15 years, viewed Correct article usage
the majority
cartoon
as their favourite channel, stood at almost a third. It is followed by sports Fix the agreement mistake
cartoons
program
at 22%, and Fix the agreement mistake
programs
then
features film and soap opera, which both of them had a similar number
at around 18%. Moreover
, TV dramas and news was
the least program in that group.
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were
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, most of
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the age
age
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ages
in
between 15 and 20 years, liked to watch features Change preposition
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film
and news, with 23% and 19% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
films
Furthermore
, the spectators of
that category preferred to watch Change preposition
in
cartoon
and sports, with an identical Fix the agreement mistake
cartoons
number
at 18 per cent. The remaining categories had small portions at under 12%.
Based on the last
group with age
below 25 years, news, sports, and features film had the highest proportions among all programs at over 20% of audiences during the period. Soap opera had a slightly lower Fix the agreement mistake
ages
number
at 19%, whereas
the number
of audiences, who watched TV dramas at only 13%. Cartoon
became the minority in that Fix the agreement mistake
Cartoons
age
groups
with Fix the agreement mistake
group
had
a small percentage.Unnecessary verb
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