You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, •explain why you changed jobs •describe your new job •tell him / her your other news

#minutes #work #company #friend #•explain #jobs #•describe #job #•tell #news

Dear Sam Hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to tell you about my new

job

. I know you will be quite interested in knowing about my experience of

job

changes. To make you familiar with my earlier work, it was at Subway. You will be shocked by knowing that it took around 2 hours to reach there and the travelling time was around 4 hours which was quite stressful.

Moreover

, the physical workload was too much as I have to look for the things like delivery, inventory and training of new staff. Not only that, but

also

the owner was not friendly with me and I was facing the issue of schedule conflict. Fortunately,

due to

my related ,

Change the punctuation

apply

show examples

degree

Add a comma

,degree

show examples

I got a

job

in a call centre. And here I can work from home which

also

saves my travelling time. ,

Also

it is a sitting

job

which is quite good compared to the Subway business. You will be glad to know that they will promote me within the next 6 months which will lead to an increase in my pay too. I am

also

so much excited to share with you the news of my parents that they are

also

going abroad the following week. If you are having time

then

just come here that week to meet them and we will do fun together. Hope to meet you soon. Your friend Sarah

Submitted by Gagan on Sun Jun 18 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

237 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
There is an increasing number of people who want to buy expensive or higher-branded products. These are highly qualified and honored rather than simply fast fashion clothes or products. I think this is a positive development because these superior goods can be used for a long time, contributing to eco-friendly practice in our consumer-driven era.
5.5
band
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Science and technology has a huge impact on our society, which is why some people argue that all college students must focus on the current issues that the world is facing nowadays. Besides that, some still believe that everyone has a right to decide whatever they want. This essay will elaborate two perspectives which can give a great view on their prospective careers.
5
band
some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Raising children is always a matter of debate especially regarding expressing opinions. People have different views about whether their youngsters should have the opportunity to choose everything affecting their life or not. While this may lead to some downsides, I believe this will enhance their dependence and confidence.
8
band
Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to get a university education. Some people believe that universities should help them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that universities will help students who are from disadvantaged families or rural areas although they are finding it difficult to get a university education. Personally, I totally agree with this point of view for a variety of reasons.
5.5
band
Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available
Hope you are doing well. I saw your pamphlet in the newspaper that you are looking for someone to help with cooking for 2-3 hours during the upcoming warmer season. I help in making lunch and dinner meals and if I have extra time I will try to take care of your daughter as well.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, •explain why you changed jobs •describe your new job •tell him / her your other news

The Closing

More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to get a university education. Some people believe that universities should help them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?