Some people say that it is the responsibility of the citizens to take care of the environment. While others say that it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both the views and state your opinion.

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environment

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can be everything around the

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and it should be prioritized

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all

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. Some

group

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of

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believe that take caring

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the

environment

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should be a responsibility of the

citizens

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,

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others think that it is a duty of the

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. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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with, it is true to say that the responsibility for saving the

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is a part of the population to be aware

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easiest thing that they could do is that stop throwing rubbishes in public areas, leading to

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the

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more cleaner and the

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would be revival.

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, taking

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public transport

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is a better choice

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the

citizens

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for

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take caring an air pollution,

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for the

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,

instead

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of using personal cars. Plus, walking or riding a bicycle

also

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be a great alternative, if the distance is not too far.

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, another responsibility of the population is reducing plastic

such

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as bags and

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,

effecting

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affecting

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to

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the

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sea animals. To illustrate, many news on

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television always report about saving

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sea life

like

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turtles which die almost

everyday

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caused

from

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the

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strews.

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, saving the

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is not only the duty of

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,

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but

also

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the

government

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who

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should be responsible for taking care of the

environment

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. They should educate

people

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to be aware of the

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country

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problems

such

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as global warming and air pollution.

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, they should construct more green places like a garden, leading to

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environment

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.

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,

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should be encouraged to grow trees which can reduce CO2 and make the

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more green. In conclusion, both

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and population have a huge impact on the

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. The

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should encourage

people

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to be aware and the

citizens

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also

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help to coordinate to make the

country

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more lively.