Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While
some people are of the opinion that teenagers
should work
part-time to earn money, there are others who believe that this
approach will make teenagers
compromise rest time and after-school activities
. This
essay will discuss the debate and reach a conclusion.
The supporters of part-time working choice for teenagers
think they will learn basic life
skills while
working. For example
, students can gain independence and self-assurance by working with others. Youngsters are more mentally active in learning basic life
skills at this
age. Besides
studies, there is also
a need for extra-curricular activities
, of which part-time work
is one. It provides not only money but also
the personality of the teenager. For instance
, we can mention European countries where children start looking for a job at the early age of 14 because their parents advise them to be self-reliant. In addition
, in low-income families, the child of the family can make a great contribution to the family's income by working after school.
Conversely
, some people oppose this
idea by saying youngsters should not lose their leisure time or give up after-school activities
. They support this
by saying that part-time work
makes teenagers
stressed and tired of any extra activities
to perform. Some parents also
think part-time work
is a hindrance to their studies. For instance
, finding a job for young people is very limited in countries like Iran, to the extent that parents make their children too dependent on them and provides money for their children's basic needs.
In Conclusion, it can be said that both views are reasonable and the best approach is to find a balance between the youngsters’ working life
, family life
, and study time. Only then
do students become perfect human beings.
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