Write a letter to your trainer to let him/her know that you cannot continue doing a sport activity with him/her. In your letter Give details of the sport activity and your session times Explain why you are leaving Tell the trainer what you liked about him/her.

Dear Nick, I hope you're having a great day. The group class

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night was great as always! That was exactly what I needed after having

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busy day at work. I'm just writing to ask you to suspend my membership from next Monday as I have to go back home for a

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. As you know, I usually join your classes at 5pm whenever I can make it on weekdays and

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every Saturday morning. Unfortunately, I have to go back to Japan for at least 3 months from next week. I heard from my parents

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night and they told me that my dad's going to be hospitalised next Friday and having an operation the following week.

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I've decided to go home to support my family. I'm always excited to join a class especially when you are coaching. You're really encouraging and inspiring. Since

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joined Strong Nation in Brighton, I lost 4 kilos in my weight. Without your help and

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, I couldn't

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my goal and I can't thank you enough, Nick! I'm sorry to

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minute but I hope you understand my situation. Thank you very much and I look forward to seeing you again in a few months. Warm wishes, Keiko Smith

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Jun 19, 2023

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

218 words

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Write a letter to your trainer to let him/her know that you cannot continue doing a sport activity with him/her. In your letter Give details of the sport activity and your session times Explain why you are leaving Tell the trainer what you liked about him/her.

Structure your letter

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