You and your neighbors have noticed that the rubbish collection services where you live have become quite bad. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter: -Explain what you have recently experienced . -Explain what your neighbors recently experienced . -Ask what action will be taken to improve the service.
Dear Mr or Mrs
I am writing to you with the hope that we will find a solution to the problem.
Two or three days ago I noticed that junk collectors started to skip some houses, or even more; when they try to take rubbish in a trailer, they just scatter it everywhere! I could see trash almost everywhere: on my lawn, on my pet's house, and even on the roofs of houses just because of poor services and the wind.
In addition
, my neighbours who have cats and dogs noticed that their lovely pets had eaten some plastic stuff. And who will pay for it if they die? Such
an unscrupulous attitude to work can lead to bad consequences. Also
, my neighbours noticed that the workers of the rubbish service just didn't seem to care about our complaints. They kept on doing bad work.
As a result
, we all want to know immediately what measures you will take. You can contact us or come and see every evidence
on your own.
Thank you for your understanding and time.Correct quantifier usage
piece of evidence
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Coherence
To enhance coherence, make sure each paragraph delves into a distinct aspect of the issue, seamlessly flowing from your experiences to those of your neighbors, and then to requested actions.
Language Use
Use varied and precise language to describe the issues more vividly, which can increase the impact of your message.
Task Response
Consider adding suggestions for improving the rubbish collection services to demonstrate proactive engagement and solution-oriented thinking.
Content
Effectively conveyed the seriousness of the rubbish collection issue and its impact on the community.
Tone
Maintained a formal tone suitable for the context of addressing a local council, aiding in the letter's overall appropriateness.
Structure
The structure of the letter allows for easy identification of the three main points as requested by the task directive.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,