The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
This
bar chart depicts the ratio
of people
going to cinemas
on days of the week in one Europe country.
It is clear from the graph that, Saturday had the highest percentage of people
who are going to cinemas
of all time.
According to
what is shown, on Monday the ratio
of people
who went to cinemas
was 2% in 2003. After that
the number increased nearly by 4 Add a comma
,that
percent
to reach 14% in 2005 . And as for Change the spelling
per cent
2007
the percentage decreased to represent approximately 12 per cent . On Wednesday the figure Add a comma
,2007
of
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for
people
who went to cinemas
was about 15% but it dropped gradually between 2003 and 2007 to reach 8%.
On the other hand
, on Friday the number consisted the same from 2003 to 2007, whereas
on Saturday the ratio
was 40% in 2003 but it soared nearly 5 percent to accounts
for 45% in 2005. After that, the percentage dipped to 42% in 2007.
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account
To sum up
, we could say on Friday, Saturday and Sunday the ratio
was as
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at
it
highest compared to the rest of the weekdays.Correct pronoun usage
its
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