The chart shows British emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007 . Summarize the information and make comparison.

The chart shows British emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007 . Summarize the information and make comparison.
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provided bar chart illustrates the number of British people who emigrated to five countries over the period from 2004 to 2007.It can be seen that the most popular place that Britons preferred to move to was Australia. Emigration to Australia was just over 40000 people, in 2004, which was approximately 6000 higher than for Spain, and it was twice as high as for the other three countries.
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, emigration was highest for Australia, in 2006, at just over 51000, it dropped to nearly 42000 humankind. Despite
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, it was still higher than any other destination. The second most popular place that Britons prefer to move to was Spain though, its popularity declined over the given time frame to finish at just below 30000 individuals, but it was still above the remaining three countries.
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to that, emigrants to New Zealand was nearly 20000 over the given period,
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it fluctuated for the USA between 18000 and 2000. In spite of ,that the number of visitors to France climbed to above 30000, it was the least popular place to move to
at the end
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of the time , in 2007.
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