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New technologies for communicating and working remotely have led to an increase in the number of people working from home. Do you think the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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The massive development of the internet and gadgets has extensive benefits in supporting
people
 to land a job from across the country without even leaving the comfort of their bedroom.
While
this
 can offer better flexibility, the risks of being prone to burnout and other mental health issues are worth considering as well. In
this
 essay, I would like to argue the benefits and drawbacks of the trend toward remote working.
To begin
 with, the trend of remote working arises
due to
 the concerns of working-class
people
 who work 9-to-5 over how hard it is to achieve work-life balance and how little free
time
 they have to spend with their loved ones. Working from home enables
people
 to have more balance in their professional lives because they can allocate their commute
time
 to spending
time
 with their family or doing hobbies. Unfortunately,
this
 benefit
also
 comes with its own drawbacks. Since
people
 do not need
to
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spare
time
 to commute and have more leeway in setting up their work hours, they are often trapped in burnout.
Furthermore
, it is easier for employees to end up working extra hours because there are no strict work hours.
To sum up
, working from home can be beneficial as long as
people
 can set healthy boundaries to know when it is
time
 to stop working and enjoy the
time
 to do whatever matters.
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