It is better to learn the way people lived in the past through films and video records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People
hold conflicting views about
studying
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whether studying
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the way
people
lived in the past through
video
or movie is a good method for everyone or not.
Although
many
people
think that
video
helps them to absorb knowledge easily, I would argue that written
documents
are vital sources. On the one hand, I firmly hold the view that
films
and
video
records offer valuable and vivid understandings
in
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the past, especially figure past events and environments.
For example
,
films
such
as “Ban danh sach cua Schindler” or “Saving Private Ryan” can
provides
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viewers visual
experiences
about past events and aspects that
people
are difficult to imagine when reading
documents
in books or newspapers. Another reason is the personal aspects can be seen through past
videos
. The most important evidence supporting my belief is that if written
documents
are mostly by famous writers, it is more likely to be more objective as it is collected
by
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many different sources.
Consequently
,
this
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aspects make the audiences find the content more relatable to them rather than reading a long story.
On the other hand
, in spite of these causes above, I
also
understand that
people
have an upward trend to opt for written
documents
when learning about the way
people
lived in the past. The obvious reason is that manuscripts provide correct and particular information rather than
videos
. As an illustration of
this
, it is obvious that
documents
such
as
diary
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diaries
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, magazines r letters supply personal accounts
about
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daily life in the past. To be precise,
this
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these
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documents
can give us a glimpse of
emotions
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the emotions
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, thinking and
experiences
of those who live in
the
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particular period.
However
,
films
and
videos
often create for entertainment and
not
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do not
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reflect correctly about
reality
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the reality
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of daily life.
Moreover
, written
documents
can be
analyze
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analysed
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and
explain
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explained
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deeply, compared to
films
or
video
records. It is clearly seen that historians can check
used
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the used
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language, background
about
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written manuscripts and information of
author
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the author
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to figure out about past events and social norms at that time.
In contrast
,
videos
bring passive
experiences
that are not allowed to explain and understand more deeply. In conclusion,
while
many
people
argue that
films
and
videos
bring more vivid and entertaining
experiences
in the past, I
also
agree with the
viewpoint
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that written
documents
are an appropriate option for those who want an objective and quick review
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • historical events
  • visual representation
  • immerse
  • bring to life
  • accuracy
  • bias
  • limited scope
  • perspective
  • incomplete
  • superficial
  • detailed
  • reliable
  • primary sources
  • firsthand accounts
  • critical analysis
  • interpretation
  • balance
  • comprehensive understanding
  • critical thinking skills
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