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Boxing is a bloody sport that often results in physical injuries. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree?

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Among sports, Boxing is often argued to be too violent to be trained in current times,considering its harsh nature. In my opinion, it would be a one-sided point of view
to conclude
such
 a statement.
Firstly
, Boxing is one of the most energetic sports, and as others do, helps to realise players' energies in the ring, where both players do their match.
Hence
, Self-defence is a benefit of boxing which should not be ignored. considering all these, boxing could lead to creating more gentle behaviour and anger control later in society.
Moreover
, it is eventually up to humans how to behave, as their free will plays the main role in their life, As e can witness in a movie named "SouthPaw". All the above added together, we can conclude that boxing is merely a sport, not more.
Secondly
, it is an energetic workout and every year lots of tournaments are held fans enjoy how players hit below the belt and it gives them a sense of joy by realising adrenaline and dopamine.
Also
, Boxing not only helps create a strong state of mind and determination through harsh training and strict diets before matches
,
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 but
also
 helps shape muscles and it can lead to confidence and self-esteem rising levels. So positive aspects of the training are considered to tackle
this
 theory of it being unsuitable for recent years.
Finally
, despite the physical injuries which boxing has, as there are in any martial art, its advantages in bodily performance and self-defence techniques, make
this
 sport worth giving it a try.
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