You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. In your letter, you should tell: what you have done for the company in the year you worked there what changes you would like to recommend what training you require

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Dear Mr Patel I am writing

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letter to let you know, the Monthly budget report was done today, to present in tomorrow's progress review meeting. In my past experience in

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company, highlighted forecasting plans and expenditure curves. As per the project director's advice separated manpower, materials, and machinery payments monthly wise. Monthly, cash flows are included in the presentation. But, Quality inputs waiting from Mr John. Once I receive will update you immediately.

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, I want to illustrate, project planned progress and actual progress curves. And, to present a risk register with major problems, solutions and impacts.

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might be vital information to know every stakeholder. Microsoft Power BI is the most advanced software nowadays, I want to work with

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software. So, I contacted the IT department in our organisation. They need approval from you. It will take 2 days duration to complete

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course. Looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely Anand

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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156 words

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