Write about the following topic: Many species of animals all around the world are on the verge of extinction. Some say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on the problems of human beings. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

All around the world, there are various types of

animals

that are endangered. Some say that nations and people should preserve them from dying out,

whereas

others believe that we need to be more

concious

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conscious

on

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the

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human

being

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problems.

This

essay will demonstrate why it is essential to balance both

animals

and humans by making

this

planet a better place to live, with a lucid conclusion. Because of the excessive usage of plastics, there are many marine species lose their lives every year. A recent example, Juhu beach in Mumbai, had hundred of

fishes

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fish

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and sea

animals

died, and evidence shows that most of their stomachs were filled with plastic bottles. Not only that, many cows in Ahmedabad

has

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died because they have eaten polythene bags

along with

the food. It is highly

recommded

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recommended

to show some empathy as an

eduated

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educated

society, and we should stop throwing plastics on

road

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to make

earth

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a better place to live for every living species. On the other end, others suggest that there are countless problems for human beings that

needs

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attention rather than focusing on dying

animals

. Somehow it is correct but as

a

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human

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beings

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being

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we need to make a balance between humans and

animals

on our living planet.

if

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there are no cows,

for example

, no human being would

able

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to get

animals

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animal

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based products like curd, milk and paneer.

Hence

, it is our job to preserve them. To summarise, it is quite understandable that humans are too busy with their lives and problems, they simply do not have time to stop the extinction of some species. In my opinion, it is

out

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our

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duty to balance the planet on which we are living,

also

we should stop the uncontrollable plastics

,

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so that various

animals

can live

healthy

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.