With an increasing population communicating via internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become the thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?

As the world keeps spinning, the development of technologies
also
keeps increasing in a way that we cannot imagine.
While
some of our parents are still using old-fashioned
communication
such
as letters, postcards, and face-to-face
communication
, in
this
disrupted era, people tend to move to use the internet, e-mail and online meeting platforms.
While
some believe
this
way of
communication
needs to be replaced, I believe that the classic ways of
communication
still need to exist. For the past 3 years, Covid-19 makes us disrupt several activities and
communication
is one of the sectors that had a huge change with the help of the internet and online
communication
.
While
these methods offer several benefits, I believe that some of the activities still need to be conducted in an
offline
method that involved emotion though it. During online
communication
, I think we are not putting our passion and feeling that much compared to
offline
meeting,
this
is
due to
during online meeting we usually not turning on the camera and tends to conduct other activities
therefore
the
business
results
will not be as positive. As a
business
person, there are plenty of examples that I already experienced, and the
results
would be
offline
negotiation gave more positive impacts on our
business
compared to online negotiation.
While
I disagree with the opinion, there is
also
benefit followed for
this
disruption and one of them would be time-consuming. In an online meeting, we can save plenty of time, especially the time for commuting. Specifically in Jakarta, that have one of the worst traffic in the world, reduce in commuting will
also
increase our productivity and
as a result
more positive
business
results
.
To conclude
,
while
I disagree with the main ideas, there were
also
benefits that followed. With
this
in mind, I believe, we need to be picky about when should we use online
communication
and when we should pursue
offline
communication
for giving better
business
results
for our community.
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