With an increasing population communicating via internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become the thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?

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As the world keeps spinning, the development of technologies

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keeps increasing in a way that we cannot imagine.

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some of our parents are still using old-fashioned

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as letters, postcards, and face-to-face

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, in

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disrupted era, people tend to move to use the internet, e-mail and online meeting platforms.

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some believe

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way of

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needs to be replaced, I believe that the classic ways of

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still need to exist. For the past 3 years, Covid-19 makes us disrupt several activities and

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is one of the sectors that had a huge change with the help of the internet and online

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these methods offer several benefits, I believe that some of the activities still need to be conducted in an

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method that involved emotion though it. During online

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, I think we are not putting our passion and feeling that much compared to

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meeting,

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during online meeting we usually not turning on the camera and tends to conduct other activities

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the

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will not be as positive. As a

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person, there are plenty of examples that I already experienced, and the

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would be

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negotiation gave more positive impacts on our

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compared to online negotiation.

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I disagree with the opinion, there is

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benefit followed for

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disruption and one of them would be time-consuming. In an online meeting, we can save plenty of time, especially the time for commuting. Specifically in Jakarta, that have one of the worst traffic in the world, reduce in commuting will

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increase our productivity and

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more positive

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I disagree with the main ideas, there were

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benefits that followed. With

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in mind, I believe, we need to be picky about when should we use online

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and when we should pursue

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communication

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for giving better

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results

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for our community.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

327 words

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