the diagram belows shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years
These diagrams depict a floor plan for a public library now and
before
20 years. It is clear from the maps that they removed the tables and the chairs from the centre of the floor.
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According to
what is shown they replaced the adult fiction books to be in the same area for the non-fiction in front of the information desk. Next,
they added a children’s room
with storytelling events with two sofas on the left and the right corner.
Moreover
, they replaced the tickets zone to share the same place with
the information desk, and they built a café on the left side of the entry. ,Change preposition
as
,
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Finally
they added a new lecture Add a comma
,Finally
room
and cancelled the video games room
to be just a computer room
.
To sum up
, we could say that all the rooms in the building had changed, and there were some services cancelled in the new plan.Submitted by qazwsxcvbnm1452 on
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