The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The chart illustrates the figures for producing and consuming power of ranking ten countries in 2014.
It is noticeable that China and the United States are the majority of using electricity. There were over five thousand billion kWh in both creation and consumption of power, which is the top 1 of 10 nations.
Subsequently
, the USA was ranked in second place, reaching 4099 billion in production, and 3866 billion in consumption services.
As can be seen from the following countries, such
as Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and the Republic of Korea. The electricity that had been produced was always more than it had been consumed, except for Germany. It means that this
country might lack services for dwellers to use.
In conclusion, China and USA used the most power in 2014, approximately five times more than the third one, which is Russia. Furthermore
, these two countries are around even ten times more than France, Brazil, Germany, and the Republic of Korea, which expended around 500 tons kWh.Submitted by Elena on
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