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In recent years, online education is becoming more and more popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? Use specific details and examples to explain your opinion.

#years #education #phenomenon
Online learning has surged in popularity in recent
year
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years
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.
This
 essay suggests that
while
this
 mode of
education
 may reduce
costs
 typically associated with traditional schooling, online
education
 can potentially impact children’s health and learning but
also
 their current gaps in equality. Online learning can greatly benefit both
parents
 and
students
 by reducing unnecessary
costs
 that they have to normally pay in their traditional schools. Normally, some
parents
 and children who do not live nearby their schools have to spend a huge amount of money and time
to commute
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 to their schools.
However
, when most of their classes are converted into online learning experiences, these people can save more money to spend on other more important items.
For instance
, the
students
 can allocate these
costs
 to spend on devices that can help in their learning,
such
 as computers, tablets, and printing machines respectively. Obviously, as
students
 and
parents
 can minimize their extra
costs
 from online learning, it is no doubt that
this
 mode of
education
 may sound attractive to anyone. Despite its obvious attractiveness, online
education
also
 has its serious drawbacks since an excessive amount of
screen
 time can potentially harm children’s health. Since most of the classes will be conducted online,
students
 may be forced to overly use their eyes and constantly stare at the
screen
 every day.
This
 constant use of
screen
 time can damage their eyes as the computers emit blue light from the
screen
, which can lead to early myopic regression among children. Clearly, by taking these drawbacks into account,
parents
 and
students
 should think carefully before choosing online
education
 for their children. In conclusion, online
education
 can provide many benefits to both
parents
 and
students
,
such
 as
costs
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 reduction in transportation and habitat.
However
, concerns about the
eyes
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eye
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 problem still
occurs
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occur
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.
Therefore
,
parents
 should consider carefully before selecting online learning.
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