The 3 pie charts illustrate the rate of 4 types of transport are driven in the United Kingdom in 1996, 1985 and 2005.
The three pie charts illustrate the rate of four types of
transport
which were driven in the United Kingdom in 1996, 1985 and 2005.
Overall
, the main tendency was the prevalence of private cars the whole period, while
the less used transport
was recreational vehicles.
Obviously, the rate of driving Private transport
increased significantly every 20 years, starting at 40% in 1965 and ending at more than half in 2005, whereas
the trend of using Recreational vehicles dropped considerably from 15% in 1965 to 8% in 2005.
At the same time, the frequency of using public transport
slightly fluctuated, accounting for 25% in 1965, but decreased slightly by 5% in 1985, then
rose again and reached 22% in 2005.
The proportion of using other kinds of transport
has the same pattern, consisting of 20% in 1965, but fell dramatically and was estimated at 10% in 2005.Submitted by s_syedy on
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