Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days,

due to

the development of technology, more people prefer to work and study online. In my opinion,

this

advancement can be both

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and

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disadvantages

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effects. On the one hand, there are several benefits of virtual working and studying.

Firstly

, distance learning allows students

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affortable

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affordable

tuition. It is obvious that online

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courses

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are much

more

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cheaper than attending

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physical

class

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classes

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,

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because

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and facilities

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are not include

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in online class fees.

Consequently

, students could have more opportunities to study.

Secondly

, virtual working provides employees with

flexible

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timetable.

In particular

, without staying in

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the workplace

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,

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employees might do their

task

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online whenever and wherever they want.

By working

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in flexible time, it helps work officers

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senses

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of

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.

As a result

, it could lead to working more effectively.

On the other hand

,

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working

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and learning from home could bring several negative impacts. The most harmful effect is

lack

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of people

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.

It is clear that

when working at home,

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adults have less chance to communicate

to

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their

colleges

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.

Consequently

, the relationship of employees in

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the workplace

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could

be lose

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.

In addition

,

exccessive

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excessive

studing

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studying

online might have detrimental to children's health.

For example

, there is an increasing

children

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number of children

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who are prone to obesity, because they spend a lot of time

studing

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studying

online

instead

of take regular exercise.

As a result

, their health could be put in danger. In conclusion, distance learning and working could be both negative and positive impacts. People have to balance, in order to alleviate the disadvantages and make use of the advantages.