The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates the summary number of travellers to Ashdown Museum during the two periods,
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the pie charts show their satisfaction of them, grouped into 5 categories.
Overall
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, people visiting Ashdown Museum have increased after refurbishment, to be more precise, the statistics added from 74 thousand to 92 thousand.
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, the result of surveys depicts that the majority of people move from the dissatisfied to the satisfied category.
According to
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the figures before the exhibition redecorated, there were 40% of people dissatisfied with
this
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place where exhibit the arts. Following by the group of satisfied, very satisfied, very dissatisfied, and no response, which accounted for 30%, 15%, 10%, and 5%, respectively. As can be seen from the following diagram after redecoration, the proportion of satisfied option visitors, reached 40%, which is the highest of all five satisfied options. Compare with before, the result of the very satisfied rose from 15% to 35%, and the result of the very dissatisfied decreased from 10% to 5%, which is half than before.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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