The graph and bar chart show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa

The graph and bar chart show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa
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The bar chart gives information about the average monthly
rainfall
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,
while
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the line graph illustrates the
temperature
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in an area of East Africa.
It is clear that
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the
temperature
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in March is the highest point during the
year
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,
whereas
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April has the highest average
rainfall
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of the
year
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.
In addition
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, July has the lowest average
temperature
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and
rainfall
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of the
year
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. On the one hand, the average precipitation in the two first
month
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months
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is relatively low, just around 25 mm, which is followed by a significant increase to reach a peak at approximately 280 mm in April. July experiences a remarkable decrease in average
rainfall
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at 10 mm. There is a slight climb before an extreme increase to 150 nm in October and November.
Finally
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, precipitation decreases to 50 nm
at the end
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of the
year
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.
On the other hand
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, there is a quick rise from 22
degrees
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in January to a peak at roughly 28
degrees
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in March, followed by a dramatic decline to reach the lowest point of 18
degrees
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in July. Three months later,
temperature
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witnesses a considerable rise to above 25
degrees
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before decreasing to about 21
degrees
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in the final month.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, temperature, year, degrees with synonyms.
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