In some countries, health care and education are only partially funded by the government. Which do you think is better in terms of quality: free public healthcare and education or privately paid health care and education?

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Health care and education are vital to every citizen of a country. In recent years, these two sectors have been the most discussed topics by the government. Most of the nations around the world have partially funded health care and education.
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, the question will always be if it is better to access the free ones or the private ones. In my opinion, private
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provide
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services
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to people. On the one hand, there will always be public
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in every country which is beneficial. They provide free
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to its citizens.
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, in the Philippines, public
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are free of charge and students could study freely without worrying about the tuition fee.
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will be of big help for the families who are financially struggling. But, since
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is free, there
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not much budget for major illnesses or surgeries or even for
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of
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and providing
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resource materials.
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all its constituents.
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, private health care and education will surely empty your savings.
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, they could cater
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cases in the
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and could provide teachers that graduated from renowned universities. The money that you pay for
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the ones being used for adding more programs or for reconstructing some buildings in
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or purchasing rare books for students to read.
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is what we call "what you pay is what you get". You may feel that it is a burden monetarily because it is really expensive but the
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of
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that they will give you in exchange
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the amount you paid is
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. To recapitulate, public establishments like
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and
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are advantageous for those less fortunate and people who are financially down. But, for me, if there
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private
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or
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, grab the opportunity as they provide more
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and with
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standards.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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