Some modern artirt receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survise. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reason for your answer and include any revelant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, celebrity has become a trend in media companies, which is paid attention to audiences worldwide, and from that they enhance many of their finances.

Although

some individuals believe that it is not only unfair to others but

also

encourages to the government has a measurement to resolve

this

situation,

this

can not be viewed as it is a wrong approach.

This

essay will discuss perspective and explain in the ensuing paragraphs. There are several reasons why celebrities fully deserve the recognition they have received for their accomplishments.

Firstly

, they adhere strictly to the legal rules and regulations. Celebrities often possess natural

talents

and skills that contribute to their success.

As a result

, they generate

imcome

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income

from their career,

such

as singers who earn money from their performances, events, and advertising.

This

is a fair outcome for their

hand work

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, talent and dedication.

Secondly

, famous

people

work harder than the average person and face

numberous

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numerous

challenges, including invasion of privacy and drama.

For instance

, Tom Cruise works over 12 hours a

days

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,

while

most

people

only hustle 8 hours. It is evidence that others may feel envious of the successes celebrities have attained.

On the other hand

, some argue that ordinary

people

may not have an opportunity to pursue their careers or lack

of

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appropriate

measurement

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to develop their

talents

. In fact, normal

people

often

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insecure as they may not possess innate

talents

,

due to

face financial

limitation

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limitations

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.

For instance

, entrepreneurs are non-celebrity but they

also

earn substantial incomes. One more time, it claims that other

people

may feel jealous of their talent and

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government intervention may not

necessary

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.

In addition

, normal individuals

has

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been working

bored

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jobs, and have

not

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a

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motivation to develop maximum their

talents

. To illustrate, if

normal

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person changes either the workplace or the

surround

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environments better, they will have

a

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interest in their career

,

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and might

be improve

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their incomes. It

is clearly justify

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between famous

people

and others. In conclusion, the idea above-mentioned totally

disagree

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, Celebrity completely deserved

the

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recognition

of

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their

suceess

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success

, and other

people

should not feel unfair, which stand on their own two feet. The government should not do anything because

this

is a justice of the earth