The flow chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.

The chart depicts the procedure regarding paper recovery.

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, the process of paper recycling is artificial and consists of 6 different steps. It all starts with the collection of used paper waste and ends up manufactured and usable as if new. Looking at the information more closely, we can see that the first and second steps are the gathering of waste, which is followed by the classification of the residues by hand.

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, in stage three, the remaining residues are delivered ready to be cleaned and separated from any other material that does not form part of a standard writing sheet which takes part in stage four. After that, in the fifth step, the de-inking process is executed, to remove ink and glue from the paste

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going to be converted into sheets in the final operation. The

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operation is

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charged with manufacturing the freshly recycled product.

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Topic Vocabulary:

recycling, waste management, sustainability
collection centers, transportation, recycling plant
sorting, separation, grades, types
shredding, pulping, slurry, pulp
screening, de-inking, cleaning, contaminants
refining, bleaching, color stripping, quality
forming, pressing, drying, sheets, reels
quality control, packaging, dispatching
environmental benefits, natural resources conservation
economic benefits, cost savings, job creation
challenges, limitations, process efficiency

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The flow chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease. government should focus on reducing evironmental pollution and housing problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people feel that entertainers ( e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sport stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?

in their advertising, businesses nowdays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? do you think is a positive or negative development?