Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and work goals more easily than before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many

people

argued

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that since the advent of the

internet

is indeed super easy to assist juveniles in the academic system

as well as

job

opportunities than before. I

remain

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firmly agree with

this

current trend because it is so much easier

for learning

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access and to seek a

job

vacant. In

this

,essay I will give my point of view.

On the other hand

,

It is clear that

the

internet

is one of the crucial factors which played a pivotal role in academic life

this

recent year.

To begin

with, the presence of the

internet

makes it easy to access learning materials from many sources ,especially for pupils, it is because many educational apps provide free material by subscribing to it. To illustrate, If students want to augment their comprehensive understanding of IELTS by accessing many

webs

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, namely, British Council, IDP, Youtube, and other sites.

Consequently

, they do not have to purchase any handbooks or visit the local library to learn.

Furthermore

, current technology

also

provides mini boot camps so

people

are able to level up their soft skills by joining the boot camps,

as a result

, they can acquire new skills without

expenseat

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expense

expense at

expenses

a huge cost because they can access them virtually from their homes.

Subsequently

, it is believed by some

people

that the

Internet

also

assists them in their dream

job

. Tech Companies

for instance

, provide virtual jobs with a competitive income, as ,illustration Tesla, many jobs

vacant

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such

as data science, software engineering, and UI UX engineering were vacant to

people

over

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the world and they could work from home without coming to America.

As a result

, you can have a huge salary and stay in Indonesia which means you are able to save your money for your future life.

Moreover

, one inevitable consequence of the

Internet

was saving the expenditure of corporate's expenditure,

for example

since the covid outbreak we were not allowed to conduct offline meetings,

thus

virtual meetings could become an invention to solve

this

problem,

as a result

, the company have utilized the

internet

to do virtual meeting which is saving budget and turn it as revenue. In conclusion, it can be seen that there are so many benefits of the

Internet

offers for the young generation. Once again I

remain

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firmly agree with to statement above that the

Internet

is really useful for achieving academic purposes

as well as

our dream

job

.