In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think it is positive or negative development?
It is true that in many countries,
people
from rural areas move to cities
, which caused decreasing in population in the village area. This
essay will examine why this
is a negative development and give some reasons.
To begin
with, the development of technology brings many benefits to human life. Since the information is easy to get, many opportunities are open widely to the public. There are some reasons why they step into cities
. First,
living in the city
means being close to many facilities to support people
's lives, such
as better hospitals, supermarkets, and schools. Second,
the public wants a better life. The urban offer many opportunities since it is the centre of the economy. For example
, someone who works as a farmer in a village cannot harvest their land anymore because of climate change, and their production becomes less. He needs a stable income to afford his family, so he moves to a city
. He gets a monthly wage and does not worry anymore about corps failure. As a result
, more people
in cities
affect an unbalanced number of people
in the city
and suburbs.
Furthermore
, people
tend to move to urban and leave their buildings and do not want to return to their hometowns. The village became a "Ghost Town" since all the young people
moved to cities
and left elderly people
to stay. Next,
some traditions will fade if all the people
move to the capital. For instance
, In Indonesia, there is the Batak tribe; they have a complicated tradition for weddings usually held in rural areas. However
, someone who moves to the big city
tends to ignore the tradition and choose an international wedding because it is simpler. Finally
, traditions are not held anymore because the number of families in rural areas decreased.
To conclude
, I strongly agree this
is a negative development. Equalization between cities
and suburbs needs to be done. So all the society is satisfied with their life and the balance between urban and countryside is preserved.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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