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The graph below shows the comparison of men visitors who came to the Crystal club since 2000-2015.

The graph below shows the comparison of men visitors who came to the Crystal club since 2000-2015.
The given chart illustrates the statistics of male guests who use the service of the Crystal Club from 2000 to 2015. At first glance, there was an increasing trend compared to the beginning in 2000 except for the age of 20-25
years
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 old, which is a stable trend. The unit of the number of
men
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 was shown in thousands.
According to
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 the graph, in 2000, male people who are 26–30
years
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 old presented the most figure at almost 300,000
times
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, followed by male people who are 31-35
years
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 old, appearing 250,000
times
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,
while
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men
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 who age 20-25
years
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 old, showing approximately 180,000 turns, which was the lowest point of all ages. In 2005, the 31–35
-year
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men
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 has a dramatic increase to 450,000
trips
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. There is a slight drop for both 20–25
-year
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 male youth and 26–30
-year
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 male adults, representing 150,000 and 220,000
times
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 respectively.
However
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, in 2010, 20–25
-year
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 male teenagers and 26–30
-year
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 male young adults experienced the same number at 350,000 turns,
whereas
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 there is a mild increase in 31–35
-year
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 adults, appearing at 480,000
times
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 and
then
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, it reached the highest point at 690,000
trips
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,
besides
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, 26–30
-year
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 male generation is
also
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 increasing substantially, displaying as 500,000
trips
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.
In contrast
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, the 20–25
-year
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men
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 experienced a noticeable decline to 180,000
trips
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, which was the same figure as in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, men, times, -year, trips with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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