The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
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The chart
illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrates

The plural verb illustrate does not appear to agree with the singular subject The chart. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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visits to and from the
UK
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from 1979 to 1999,
while
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

the bar chart
represents
Verb problem
shows

There may be a verb use issue here.

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the
UK
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residents
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

visit
Wrong verb form
visiting

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb visit. Consider changing it.

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the most popular countries ( Turkey ,Greece ,USA ,Spain, and France)in the years given.Both of them are measured in
millions
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.
Overall
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the line of
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

visit
Fix the agreement mistake
visits

It seems that visit may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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overseas by
UK
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

dwellers
show
Change the verb form
shows

The plural verb show does not appear to agree with the singular subject line. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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a dramatical increase in the two decades,
whereas
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

the
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

visitors
Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors

It seems that quantifier use may be incorrect here.

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from abroad who
visit
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to
Remove the preposition
apply

The preposition to seems unecessary after the verb visit. Consider removing the preposition.

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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

UK
Correct article usage
the UK

Your article usage with the geographic name UK may be incorrect.

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went up
over
Change preposition
apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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in the final years.
Moreover
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the bar chart for
most
Correct article usage
the most

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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popular countries visited by
UK
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

resident
Fix the agreement mistake
residents

It seems that resident may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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in 1999
present
Change the verb form
presents

The plural verb present does not appear to agree with the singular subject chart. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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a high bar,
whereas
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

for
USA
Correct article usage
the USA

Your article usage with the geographic name USA may be incorrect.

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is half and lower for Greece and Turkey. With regard to the
visitors
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from the
UK
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, the line for
visitor
Fix the agreement mistake
visitors

It seems that visitor may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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abroad by
UK
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residents
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

start
Wrong verb form
started

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb start. Consider changing it.

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in
Change preposition
at

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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11 in 1979 to 55
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Use synonyms

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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

millions
Change to singular
million

It appears that the number millions is modifying a noun and should be in the singular form. Consider changing it.

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in the end, and
visitor
Fix the agreement mistake
visitors

It seems that visitor may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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to the
UK
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by overseas
beguan
Correct your spelling
began

If you don’t want beguan to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

at 10
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

millions
Change to singular
million

It appears that the number millions is modifying a noun and should be in the singular form. Consider changing it.

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and
increase
Wrong verb form
increased

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb increase. Consider changing it.

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to25
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

millions
Change to singular
million

It appears that the number millions is modifying a noun and should be in the singular form. Consider changing it.

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in
the
Correct article usage
apply

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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1999
residents
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increase
Wrong verb form
increased

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb increase. Consider changing it.

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gradualy
Correct your spelling
gradually

If you don’t want gradualy to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

,
howover
Correct your spelling
however

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the line graph for visitor abroad by
UK
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residents
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is the highest.
On the other hand
Linking Words

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, the most
vitistor
Correct your spelling
visitor

If you don’t want vitistor to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

who
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Use synonyms

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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

visit
Wrong verb form
visited

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb visit. Consider changing it.

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to
Remove the preposition
apply

The preposition to seems unecessary after the verb visit. Consider removing the preposition.

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UK
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

was from France, it was over 10
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

millions
Change to singular
million

It appears that the number millions is modifying a noun and should be in the singular form. Consider changing it.

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,
while
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the
people
Correct quantifier usage
number of people

It seems that quantifier use may be incorrect here.

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from Turkey was the lowest in 1999 which was
approxiety
Correct your spelling
approximate

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3
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Use synonyms

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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

millions
Change to singular
million

It appears that the number millions is modifying a noun and should be in the singular form. Consider changing it.

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.There were two countries
had
Correct pronoun usage
that had

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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the same
visitors
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in two decades, it was nearly
4millions
Correct your spelling
4 million

If you don’t want 4millions to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

from
USA
Correct article usage
the USA

Your article usage with the geographic name USA may be incorrect.

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,
3.5millions
Correct your spelling
3.5 million

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from Greece.
Moreover
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, 9
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million

It seems that millions may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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of
Change preposition
apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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visitors
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

from Spain
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were

It seems that the verb was does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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the second
more
Correct quantifier usage
most

It seems that quantifier use may be incorrect here.

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