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The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
#line #visits #uk #bar #countries #residents
The chart
illustrate
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illustrates
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 visits to and from the
UK
 from 1979 to 1999,
while
 the bar chart
represents
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shows
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 the
UK
residents
visit
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visiting
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 the most popular countries ( Turkey ,Greece ,USA ,Spain, and France)in the years given.Both of them are measured in
millions
.
Overall
, the line of
visit
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visits
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 overseas by
UK
 dwellers
show
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shows
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 a dramatical increase in the two decades,
whereas
 the
visitors
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number of visitors
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 from abroad who
visit
to
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apply
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UK
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the UK
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 went up
over
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apply
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in the final years.
Moreover
, the bar chart for
most
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the most
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 popular countries visited by
UK
resident
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residents
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 in 1999
present
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presents
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 a high bar,
whereas
 for
USA
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the USA
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 is half and lower for Greece and Turkey. With regard to the
visitors
 from the
UK
, the line for
visitor
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visitors
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 abroad by
UK
residents
start
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started
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in
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at
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 11 in 1979 to 55
millions
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million
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 in the end, and
visitor
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visitors
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 to the
UK
 by overseas
beguan
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began
 at 10
millions
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million
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 and
increase
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increased
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 to25
millions
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million
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 in
the
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apply
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1999
residents
increase
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increased
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gradualy
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gradually
,
howover
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however
 the line graph for visitor abroad by
UK
residents
 is the highest.
On the other hand
, the most
vitistor
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visitor
 who
visit
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visited
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to
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apply
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UK
 was from France, it was over 10
millions
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million
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,
while
, the
people
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number of people
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 from Turkey was the lowest in 1999 which was
approxiety
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approximate
 3
millions
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million
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.There were two countries
had
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that had
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 the same
visitors
 in two decades, it was nearly
4millions
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4 million
 from
USA
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the USA
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,
3.5millions
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3.5 million
 from Greece.
Moreover
, 9
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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visitors
 from Spain
was
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were
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 the second
more
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most
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, residents, visit, millions, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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