The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The first bar
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gives information about the breakdown of various reasons why students choose to study, and the second pie Use synonyms
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illustrates how the tuition fee for each course needs to be shared.
It can be clearly seen that the interest in the subject of future students is by far the most common reason for studying. Use synonyms
Whereas
, the proportion of cost of individuals accounts for 40% of the total cost.
Standing at the highest position in the bar Linking Words
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, interest in the subject becomes the most popular reason why adults decide to study (40). Use synonyms
Besides
, gaining qualifications is slightly lower than that of interest in subjects, but still the second most common student objective (37). There are some other reasons Linking Words
such
as improving prospects of promotion, enjoying learning/studying, helpful for current job share almost the same figure, about 21 people selected Linking Words
this
reason. Linking Words
Finally
, the purpose of meeting people and changing jobs become the least common options.
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On the other hand
, 40% of the total costs of each course in the pie Linking Words
chart
should be paid by people. Use synonyms
Whereas
, employers should share almost the same figure with individuals, at 35%, which is by far the second highest proportion. Linking Words
Finally
, taxpayers make up 25% of the total course costs.Linking Words
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