Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? the younger has nothing to teach the older. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Most people believe that the younger has nothing to teach the older and lacks experience. In my opinion, I obviously disagree with that statement because as people grow older and older, they become wiser and might learn from everything including the children. Despite a lack of experience, the younger has a brave heart and willingness to try something new. Not only curiosity but
also
physical strength give them the benefit to achieve something.
For example
, a student in senior high school wants to camp and explore nature.
Then
, they learn something and might share their knowledge of the current forest condition with their parents or grandparents which the condition is very different between now and the past.
On the other hand
, children have unique methods how
to
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exploring by asking a
question
and repeating until they are satisfied with the answers.
In addition
, they have nothing to be worried about whether their
question
is silly or not. Children used to ask about why something
is
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happening or existed.
For instance
, why Jakarta
has
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a traffic jam? It is a difficult
question
to answer and people may have varied answers.
In contrast
, nowadays, the elderly rarely ask a
question
because they think that they are supposed to answer the
question
and not ask.
Therefore
, the elderly will not learn as much as the younger ones will learn.
To conclude
, the potential and unique questions from the younger might give information to the older about the current condition of something and they will re-think how the world
is
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changed between the past and now by asking why.
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