It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour for children?

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the education process of what is right and wrong, at an early age, through the

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's method, it's evident the way in which two wide views give the opportunity to think, compare and admit a proper opinion related.

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their children, thinking that

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one is the best way to let the little ones, understand what should be done and what not. The reasons can be many, here it's why it's dominant to consider the whole circumstances, before expressing an

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that most parents suppose that

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is much easier than wasting their time through explanation. In comparison, we find those who don't agree with the factor to use

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as a lesson to deliver, rather than take time to explain to their children, the right thing to follow in life. As has already been mentioned, everything depends on the circumstances,

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around us is fundamental. In

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, it's because they may have tried already and

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that nothing has been changed. From my personal experience, after having considered several points of view, I declare to agree with those who can't find any positive sides related to the

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, an education without explaining the reason , can't be worked

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a lesson with the reason. In conclusion, with what has already been analysed, compared and observed, it's crucial to highlight that some of the punishments could work if, the intentions are with the consequence to guide it in a positive way,

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