Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more diadvantages?

There are a lot of people that spend so much time working hard, dedicating a lot of
hours
to their professions.
This
could be a great way of life if making a career is someone's goal, rather than feeding hobbies or interesting activities. In my personal opinion,
this
choice may have both advantages and disadvantages and in
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I will explain why.
To begin
with, I believe that hard work always pays off,
hence
employees who invest a large number of
hours
at work probably will get brilliant results. Those could be declined in relevant advantages
such
as
for example
, a high salary, a wonderful job, and a personal sense of personal satisfaction.
Furthermore
, another pro could be the development of personal knowledge and soft skills, in
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these are trained and improved in every working moment.
On the other hand
,
this
decision could
also
bring with it different negative aspects.
First,
individuals that work a huge amount of
hours
usually do not have
hours
left for family, friends or hobbies.
This
implies that all the energy is invested
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the moment spent in the office with the workmates, even if there is a terrible relationship between colleagues.
Moreover
, the leisure time people renounce to will never come back, so it is important to accept
this
concept and never regret it. Parents that have a bad relationship with their children are a clear
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of people that would like to come back in time and change their way of life. In conclusion, I think that an individual should decide what he (or she) prefers being conscious that the consequences have a really important impact on his (or her) life.
This
means that an employee should never repent of his choice, even if
this
will never bring him to the desired goal or it will not satisfy his expectations.
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