Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more diadvantages?

There are a lot of people that spend so much time working hard, dedicating a lot of

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to their professions.

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could be a great way of life if making a career is someone's goal, rather than feeding hobbies or interesting activities. In my personal opinion,

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choice may have both advantages and disadvantages and in

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I will explain why.

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with, I believe that hard work always pays off,

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employees who invest a large number of

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at work probably will get brilliant results. Those could be declined in relevant advantages

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, a high salary, a wonderful job, and a personal sense of personal satisfaction.

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, another pro could be the development of personal knowledge and soft skills, in

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these are trained and improved in every working moment.

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bring with it different negative aspects.

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individuals that work a huge amount of

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usually do not have

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left for family, friends or hobbies.

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implies that all the energy is invested

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the moment spent in the office with the workmates, even if there is a terrible relationship between colleagues.

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, the leisure time people renounce to will never come back, so it is important to accept

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concept and never regret it. Parents that have a bad relationship with their children are a clear

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of people that would like to come back in time and change their way of life. In conclusion, I think that an individual should decide what he (or she) prefers being conscious that the consequences have a really important impact on his (or her) life.

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means that an employee should never repent of his choice, even if

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will never bring him to the desired goal or it will not satisfy his expectations.