You are renting an apartment. Write a letter to your landlord regarding a noise problem from your neighbors. Include the following in your letter: – What is the problem? – What have you done about it? – What would you like the landlord to do?

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Dear Mr Alex I am writing to express my frustration regarding the neighbours' disturbing noise. I am living in the 301 building for 4 years as well all were going very smoothly but suddenly when some other neighbourhoods came into our building I was extremely effective by their unexpected behaviour. They always play loud music every day and night

this

such

kind of behaviour all the building members are not going to sleep properly.

However

last

week I registered a complaint against them but nobody took steps about it . I personally asked with due respect please stop the music but I think they do not understand me.I know after my letter you will receive more complaints from building members . After doing all things at the

last

point I am writing to you and request to you please resolve the problem

otherwise

, I can not live in

this

apartment. I hope you will address these concerns as soon as possible, Yours Sincerely, Kamaldeep

Submitted by kamalsadhar2 on Tue Jun 20 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

164 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are renting an apartment. Write a letter to your landlord regarding a noise problem from your neighbors. Include the following in your letter: – What is the problem? – What have you done about it? – What would you like the landlord to do?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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