A friens of yours has always admired your car. You have now decided to sell it. Write a letter to your friend to ask if he I interested in buying your car. In your letter, •Explain why you are selling your car. •Describe the good points and any bad points about your car. •Suggest the friend visits you to see and drive your car.

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Dear James, I hope you’re well. I’m writing to let you know that I’m going to sell my Colorado semi-truck. As you know, my car is manual transmission and I have got backache recently, so it’s hard for me to press the clutch which made my back worse.

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, I’ve loved a Mustang for years, and now I have saved enough money to own one. I wonder if you still like my truck. It’s low gas-consuming as it only consumes 10 litres per 100 kilometres, and its trunk is perfect for your family to carry picnic stuff. With

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car, your family can carry out long-haul trips without any problem. The bad thing is that the white colour is easy to get dirty, so perhaps you have to have it cleaned regularly. To be more objective, I think you should come over to my place to check it, and you can have a try with it.

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, if you still like it, I can give you a good deal. I’m looking forward to receiving your response. Best regards, Joan

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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180 words

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