During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr. Henry, I am Alex Darwin, I have got a chance to travel with you from Surrey to Toronto on 21 January. At that moment, you gave me your business card to apply for a job in one of your restaurants that you could offer me. Currently, I am unemployed as the previous week I resigned from my position as assistant manager in the food industry. Because I had to commute a long distance daily.

Consequently

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employment in Etobicoke. As you have told me about work in your hotel in

this

area, so I would be grateful if you could provide me with a posting in a similar profession. I believe my qualification, experience and work-related enthusiasm meet all the requirements for it. Since,

last

year, I have completed a Bachelor's in Food and Beverage Management

along with

a placement of four months. If you have any queries or proof of the work that I have done so far I will be grateful. Please contact me with the following provided information. Thanks for your consideration and waiting for your response. Your`s sincerely Alex Darwin.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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