The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The given graph illustrates the average monthly cost of
copper
, nickel
, and zinc
in 2014.
Overall
, nickel
started with the highest percentage and ended with the lowest. nickel
prices decreased in December 2014. Meanwhile, Copper
and Zinc
prices increased.
To begin
with, the change in the price for Copper
, Nickel
, and Zinc
counted in 12 months. Nickel
started the price at 6%, and the percentage dramatically fell to -3%. in June before increasing in the last
month to 1%. In contrast
, Copper
began at 2% and peaked in February at 3%; the proportion decreased until October and finally
rose to 2% at the end
of the year. However
, Zinc
was 1% in January, and the number declined in June and inclined to around 2% in the twelfth month. The rate remained stable for all metals between July to September. Nickel
was at 1%, Zinc
proportion around 0.5%, and copper
was at -1%. Furthermore
, the rate between the three metals in December was around 1-2%.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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