The table illustrates the financial funds that America, European and other countries allocated to developing ones from 2006 to 2010.

The table illustrates the financial funds that America, European and other countries allocated to developing ones from 2006 to 2010.
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The table illustrates the financial funds that America, European and other countries allocated to developing ones from 2006 to 2010.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the amount of money donated saw an upward trend during the whole period. And
while
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the USA was the biggest contributor, the EU and other nations gave almost similar small amounts in 5 years. We can see that in 2006 the US financial fund was $ 9.8
million
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and had a rapid growth until 2008 to $ 17
million
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, but in 2009 it dropped to $ 16.7
million
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and
finally
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in 2010 increased back to 20.3
million
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USD. In the EU, the financial fund in 2006 was 3.1
million
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USD, 3 times less than in the US, but there was
also
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an increase in 2008 to 3.8
million
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USD, in 2009 dropped again to $3.6
million
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and
then
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increased to $4.1
million
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in 2010 and still 4 times less than the US. Financial funds in other countries in 2006 were $2.8
million
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and gradually increased in the following years to $3.5
million
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in 2008, decreased to $3.2
million
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in 2009 and
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increased to 3.7
million
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.
million
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dollars in 2010. So we can see that the total of countries is 15.7
million
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dollars and gradually increases to 24.4
million
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degrees in 2008 and
then
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fluctuates and increases to 28.1
million
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dollars in 2010
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