The table illustrates how much money was used for improvement purposes in the USA, EU countries and other countries between 2006 and 2010.
The table illustrates how much
money
was used for improvement purposes in the USA
, EU
countries
and other countries
between 2006 and 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
while
there was a significant increase in the amount of money
used for developing
in the Replace the word
development
USA
, that
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the
EU
and other countries
saw a gradual growth over the period except 2009
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in 2009
Moreover
, the USA
was the biggest contributor in three while
European countries
and other nations gave similar amounts of money
to developing ones.
Starting in 2006, the USA
gave 9,8 million
dollars for improving countries
, which was over three times as much as the amount of the EU
and other nations with $3.1 and $2.8 million
respectively. Over the 2-year period, the figure for money
to develop from three areas all saw an upward trend, therefore
, the total finance increased from 15,7 million
to 24,4 million
dollars.
In addition
, the year 2009 witnessed a slight drop of 0,3%, in all
the amount of Correct determiner usage
apply
money
used to improve in the USA
, the EU
and other countries
. However
, at the end
of the period, the USA
reached a peak at 20,3%, which was much larger than the total of European and other countries
together ($4.1 in Europe and $3.7 in other
).Fix the agreement mistake
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