The following diagram shows how greenhouse gasses trap energy from the sun.
The diagram shows how greenhouse gasses trap
energy
from the Use synonyms
sun
. Use synonyms
Overall
, The Linking Words
sun
is the greatest source of power to our planet, it delivers light and Use synonyms
heat
. The Use synonyms
sun
's Use synonyms
heat
is taken from the ground and water and they send out Use synonyms
this
power as Linking Words
heat
again into the higher atmosphere.
First, transportation, human activity and the factory cause Use synonyms
carbon
Use synonyms
dioxide
and the Use synonyms
carbon
Use synonyms
dioxide
travel into the Use synonyms
sun
. Our earth has fewer trees, so Use synonyms
this
can Linking Words
also
cause more Linking Words
carbon
Use synonyms
dioxide
on the earth because the tree absorbs the Use synonyms
carbon
Use synonyms
dioxide
to convert it into chemicals. Use synonyms
Next,
the Linking Words
carbon
Use synonyms
dioxide
is transported to the Use synonyms
sun
and the Use synonyms
sun
produces the Use synonyms
energy
and the Use synonyms
energy
reflects back into the atmosphere. After that, the Use synonyms
heat
reflects back into the ground and there is two pathway for the Use synonyms
heat
to go.
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Lastly
, the Linking Words
heat
Use synonyms
energy
goes into the space at the pathway and the other goes into the greenhouse gases where the Use synonyms
heat
is trapped.Use synonyms
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