The following diagram shows how greenhouse gasses trap energy from the sun.

The following diagram shows how greenhouse gasses trap energy from the sun.
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The diagram shows how greenhouse gasses trap
energy
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from the
sun
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.
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, The
sun
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is the greatest source of power to our planet, it delivers light and
heat
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. The
sun
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's
heat
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is taken from the ground and water and they send out
this
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power as
heat
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again into the higher atmosphere. First, transportation, human activity and the factory cause
carbon
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dioxide
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and the
carbon
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dioxide
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travel into the
sun
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. Our earth has fewer trees, so
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can
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cause more
carbon
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dioxide
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on the earth because the tree absorbs the
carbon
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dioxide
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to convert it into chemicals.
Next,
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the
carbon
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dioxide
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is transported to the
sun
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and the
sun
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produces the
energy
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and the
energy
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reflects back into the atmosphere. After that, the
heat
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reflects back into the ground and there is two pathway for the
heat
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to go.
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, the
heat
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energy
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goes into the space at the pathway and the other goes into the greenhouse gases where the
heat
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is trapped.
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