The following diagram shows how greenhouse gasses trap energy from the sun.

The following diagram shows how greenhouse gasses trap energy from the sun.
The diagram shows how greenhouse gasses trap
energy
from the
sun
.
Overall
, The
sun
is the greatest source of power to our planet, it delivers light and
heat
. The
sun
's
heat
is taken from the ground and water and they send out
this
power as
heat
again into the higher atmosphere. First, transportation, human activity and the factory cause
carbon
dioxide
and the
carbon
dioxide
travel into the
sun
. Our earth has fewer trees, so
this
can
also
cause more
carbon
dioxide
on the earth because the tree absorbs the
carbon
dioxide
to convert it into chemicals.
Next,
the
carbon
dioxide
is transported to the
sun
and the
sun
produces the
energy
and the
energy
reflects back into the atmosphere. After that, the
heat
reflects back into the ground and there is two pathway for the
heat
to go.
Lastly
, the
heat
energy
goes into the space at the pathway and the other goes into the greenhouse gases where the
heat
is trapped.
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