The following diagram shows how greenhouse gasses trap energy from the sun.
The diagram shows how greenhouse gasses trap
energy
from the sun
. Overall
, The sun
is the greatest source of power to our planet, it delivers light and heat
. The sun
's heat
is taken from the ground and water and they send out this
power as heat
again into the higher atmosphere.
First, transportation, human activity and the factory cause carbon
dioxide
and the carbon
dioxide
travel into the sun
. Our earth has fewer trees, so this
can also
cause more carbon
dioxide
on the earth because the tree absorbs the carbon
dioxide
to convert it into chemicals. Next,
the carbon
dioxide
is transported to the sun
and the sun
produces the energy
and the energy
reflects back into the atmosphere. After that, the heat
reflects back into the ground and there is two pathway for the heat
to go.
Lastly
, the heat
energy
goes into the space at the pathway and the other goes into the greenhouse gases where the heat
is trapped.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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