You recently ate at a local restaurant with your family and want to write to the local newspaper to tell them About the restaurant What you ate Why you would / would not recommend this restaurant

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

this

letter to you to introduce you to a newly opened restaurant in our local area. I recently visited a restaurant with the name 'Piccola Italia' - 'small Italy' with my family. It is situated in the local area called Vasai in Mumbai. As the name of the outlet reflects the type of cuisine is Italian. They

also

serve Indian food. For, the starter we tried some Indian. For the main course, we ate pasta called Lasagna and for routine taste ,buds we order for large pepperoni pizza.

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of the

dessert

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we tried the traditional dessert Tiramisu. They serve foodstuff in good hygiene conditions. I would like to recommend the restaurant to all Italian food lovers. The ambience is very nice. They welcome their guest in a traditional Italian way. The taste of the food is really really nice real value for money. I hope you will consider my review on positive notes. Yours faithfully, Jen

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