You recently ate at a local restaurant with your family and want to write to the local newspaper to tell them About the restaurant What you ate Why you would / would not recommend this restaurant

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letter to you to introduce you to a newly opened restaurant in our local area. I recently visited a restaurant with the name 'Piccola Italia' - 'small Italy' with my family. It is situated in the local area called Vasai in Mumbai. As the name of the outlet reflects the type of cuisine is Italian. They

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serve Indian food. For, the starter we tried some Indian. For the main course, we ate pasta called Lasagna and for routine taste ,buds we order for large pepperoni pizza.

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we tried the traditional dessert Tiramisu. They serve foodstuff in good hygiene conditions. I would like to recommend the restaurant to all Italian food lovers. The ambience is very nice. They welcome their guest in a traditional Italian way. The taste of the food is really really nice real value for money. I hope you will consider my review on positive notes. Yours faithfully, Jen

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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