The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart shows the
number
of
workers
and plants in the United Kingdom and Wales for fifty years.
Overall
, a main tendency demonstrates the increased
number
of labourers of both genders from 1902 to 1861, meanwhile, the rate of factories decreased.
However
, the
number
of man
workers
is always prevalent. The peak of both men and women
workers
was in 1851 and consisted of 477, of 100,
whereas
, the
number
of plants in the same year was minimal and accounted only for 225 factories. At the same time, the
number
of man-labourers was more than women, about 290,100. 1901 has the opposite pattern, the rate of
workers
was lower, 61,000,
whereas
the
number
of factories was higher and consisted of 600. Noticeably, the proportion of genders was significantly similar and had a difference of 1000. In the middle of the period, the difference between the percentage of men and women
workers
become more considerable and was about 20000 in 1881 and 1871. The
number
of
workers
slowly rose by the same amount,
while
the
number
of plants estimated its own peak at 721 in 1891.
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